Well...
Ok, Before i review i should let you know I do not consider you a Flash Animator. In no way is this flash work at all (which really means it shouldnt be on here...) but to be fair ill grade you on Stop-Motion making.
It was ok. You could take the time to take about double the pictures you did so it will be smoother. Yes i know the filesize right! Thats why you split it into 2 parts and submit them at the same time. Work on it.